Thursday 28 March 2019

nitro circus

On Sunday i went to nitro circus. I brought a nitro circus shirt. then the show started. One of the people went down a ramp in a shopping trolley. Then someone went down in garbage bin. Then a snowboard with a fake sheep on it. Then he went down in a jet ski. It was really cool then it was half time we got donuts. Then we came back. Then they did a train a train is were they do all the motorbikes at the same time. then and someone did a double back flip on a three Wheeler.






                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                   

6 comments:

  1. Cool pic you selceted

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  2. Kia ora, I am Cael
    I really liked All the detail
    I learnt that Fake sheep can ride snowboards
    Maybe you could do a bit more writing

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  3. Hi it's Jack R from Kaniere School and I love dirt bikes. I have a 125 and have been to the nitro circus too.

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  4. Hi Jack S from kaniere school my friend liam C has been to kaniere school i seen some videos that he took at nitro circus and do you know this guy tried to do a triple backflip but he failed.oops

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  6. Hi finn
    That sounds like so much fun i wish i was there! I liked how you told us lots about what happened. Next time remember to add punctuation and capital letters to your piece of writing. What was your favorite part of the circus?
    Thanks Ruby

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