Monday, 4 March 2019

My friends birthday

in the weekend I went to my friends birthday. We went on bikes and in the pool. Then we all gave him his presents. By sitting in a circle and his brother spun a bottle. and hoo ever it was pointing to got to give him there present. Then we did an escape room that his brother made for us. when we finished we got to have cake.



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  1. Anonymous4 April 2019 at 11:26

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  2. Anonymous4 April 2019 at 12:05

    Kia ora, I am Bay
    I really liked that you began your writing by saying..In the weekend.
    I learnt that nothing is impossible.
    Maybe you could add more detail next time

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